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So Long, Mr. Tuesday by ~Moon-and-Ash:iconMoon-and-Ash:



So long, Mr. Tuesday
with the chaos-theory eyes -
I can't explain away your silences
any more than I can deny that this
marks yet another attempt to
reassemble your catastrophic essence
from smoking parts
so that I might know you
in a way that's impossible
when you're both next to me and fleeting.
©2009 ~Moon-and-Ash
:iconmoon-and-ash:

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It's amazing how everything and nothing changes, sometimes.

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:icondgenreteliterabbit:
wonderful piece. i know the feeling this conveys, i think, pretty well. :clap: brilliant.

--
RUN, rabbit, run
dig that hole, forget the sun
and when at last the work is done
don't sit down, time to dig another one

steps taken forward
and sleepwalking back again...
encumbered forever by desire and ambition
:iconmoon-and-ash:
Thanks!! :D I always worry that I'm getting predictably maudlin, but as long as others can relate, I think I'm safe ;)
:iconadmiralvorkraft:
"Chaos-theory eyes" what an incredible image. Thank you.

--
Illusion is the first of all pleasures - Oscar Wilde
:iconthetaoofchaos:
deliciously quixotic, enigmatic; one phantom lover endowed with more atoms than the others?

--
The world is an eraser for these words


- Jack Kerouac


we must destroy that which contains us
:iconkiri-catastrophe:
"So long Mr. Tuesday with the chaos-theory eyes~"

Brilliance, from start to finish!

--
"Writing, at its best, is a lonely life. Organizations for writers palliate the writer's loneliness, but I doubt if they improve his writing..." -- Hemingway
:icondgenreteliterabbit:
you're safe! :D

--
RUN, rabbit, run
dig that hole, forget the sun
and when at last the work is done
don't sit down, time to dig another one

steps taken forward
and sleepwalking back again...
encumbered forever by desire and ambition
:iconmoon-and-ash:
Thank you for thinking it so. :)
:iconmoon-and-ash:
Oh no, they all seem to share the same relative number of atoms. That's likely part of the problem. ;)

A great comment too, by the way. I think I may have to strive more for this 'delicious'; quixotic or otherwise.
:iconmoon-and-ash:
Awww, thank you *so* much for the super kind words! :hug:

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